"Effin horrible dude!"

"Yep. I held my tongue about the Elizabeth song but this is just bad. "

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"Your d*** is going to be all shitty and stinky, just like your songs."

"tl; dr"

"Thank you Chris, I have another almost done I will post in about a week, hopefully it will seem more original, lol"

"Good, in fact, really good, probably a lot better of a song than a lot of the people on this forum could come up with."

"Rust Lee, I do greatly appreciate your feedback and completely understand what you are saying, although i would like to point out that everyone derives from some sort of inspiration and I have a very few. I have plenty of original songs here…"

"It sounds just like Ozma."

"I was not my intention to be brutal. At all. I work as a songwriter and would have loved it if people actually told me the truth when I was starting out. The things is, when you're young and just starting out writing songs, you tend to think…"

"This post was brutal as was the Rust Lee one. "

"The're alot of things "wrong" with this song so I don't know where to start. The main thing that will stop you from getting anywhere with your music is that the song is one big cliché. It's like a mixtape. Throw in…"

"http://weezer.com/forum/topics/my-first-studio-recorded-song "