"Yeah that's a tough key for me, probably should have used a capo and switched it up.
I also feel a little awkward singing at this stage and it was my first go at it in a long time, so I can understand why it wasn't good.
The thing is…"
"there's a lot to improve upon here.
First, when you are singing, you sound bored, like it's the last thing on earth you want to do. If you are having trouble singing full out in that key, change the key of the song to better fit…"
"I think you should try and work on your vocals a bit, add bass guitar because it'll make it sound a lot better overall and try and use a better snare drum. The guitar is good though and the drums fit well."
"Vocals are rough, I would try just attacking the living crap out of your voice cause the softness isnt doing it but the guitars and drums sounded good. If you play this live I would be jumping around so Keep it up!"
"i stopped listening after you failed to include the part where you hold the strings and slide your hand down the neck of the guitar after you first say "you gave your love to me softly". not sure what that's called but it sounds…"
"I think it's safe to say that about 90% of the people still writing on these boards wish Weezer would go back to their Pinkerton-era style. But it just won't happen. Rivers is happily married with a kid. He's getting older, and not…"