How long have you been playing & song writing?
I'll give you an honest critique. (If you don't want this kind of feedback then quit reading.)
It's off to a pretty good start! But I figured you probably haven't been playing that long. You're playing and song writing is decent enough. Lacks a little experience I can tell but you will develop naturally. You have a sense of melody and such. That's good! Maybe try different rhythms as well. Like I said, you're off to a good start. Keep it up! 7 or 8 months consistently, if you keep it up, you'll be AT LEAST twice as good 7-8 months from now. There's something there.
Yeah, no problem. :) If you have any new songs in the future I'll give them a listen.